do you think these lyrics are any good?
they are meant to symbolise the world we live in
The shield of fate
Verse 1
Look at the world see it turn and spin
For the fear it gives pulls us in
I see the sun high into the sky
The people souls rise ever high
And the wastelands we do hide
For the peace will never ride
The grass blows sweet and
A planet grows weak
And the sky rides flowing slow
Thunder crashes up below
And still we run up to the stars
For we know that we deal the cards
For the life breath that takes it course
We ride the heavens warhorse
The ground shakes and quakes
And we are bitten by gods snake
Chorus
See me stride run now go
The world turns to slow
Look at the mess we cause
Now just stop and pause
You can close the heavens gate
Just hide behind the shield of fate
Verse 2
Hide your face for you now can
Close your door to stop the ban
The clouds they turn black again
They start to pour acid rain
For our planet keeps dieing
And we have to keep trying
With the wrath of the flames
We say those curse’ed names
Take them hide them keep them
Ride them hide them keep beside them
Do what you want for it’s your wish
The earth burns darkness yearns
But our planet must return
Take your waste do you stuff
Prove that you are tough enough
You can change you know you can
Just throw you voice and raise your hands
Chorus
Third verse
Now it’s gone what have we done
Is it to late just what is our fate?
The world is black the panics back
Could we have stop our attack
Look at this mess where has it gone
Our planet used to be the one
We wasted our chance it is no more
Our home has faced it last encore
And yet I still want to shout
There’s something to get out
I know we can no longer ride
But still I have you at my side
Gods crash and lightning breaks
Fog’s of fate have risen too late
The flames of hell have won again
We need to stop the pain and regain
Chorus
See me stride run now go
The world turns to slow
Look at the mess we cause
Now just stop and pause
You can close the heavens gate
Just hide behind the shield of fate
yes i did write these and thank you for your comments
if you like it please tell others as i want as many opinions as i can get
Wow…did u write this? its amazing…there’s so much emotion in the words…well done =]
X
Comments
Comment from CC26
Time December 25, 2009 at 5:22 am
Wow…did u write this? its amazing…there’s so much emotion in the words…well done =]
X
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Comment from Andrew W
Time December 25, 2009 at 6:05 am
thats class that mate
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Comment from LOLz!!!
Time December 25, 2009 at 6:52 am
Full of reality and deep discernment of the world today.. metaphors and embellishments are superb! g’job!?
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Comment from madonion54
Time December 25, 2009 at 7:35 am
They’re amazing Lyrics.
I would buy your song if you publish it!
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Comment from Bethany D
Time December 25, 2009 at 4:53 am
They are beautiful.
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